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Depths of the Heart: Page 22

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Fionna opened her eyes to find Marshall gone. Now, he was surely gone forever. She sobbed in a fetal position on ground. She screamed her lungs out and prayed for this nightmare to end.


Marshall opened his eyes. Everything was bright, clean, and pure. He was confused. He remembered being in Fionna’s arms moments ago. His burns and scars were gone and he felt perfectly fine. He wondered why he was here, if he was dead, why would he be in a holy and sacred place. Wouldn’t he be rotting in a pit of fire?

“Am I dead?” he asked himself.

“Yes, and no” a voice said.

Marshall turned to find a man dressed in a white robe. “Who are you?” Marshall asked.

“I’m a spirit who can save you.”


Saved? Marshall thought to himself. He was wondering why he would be given a second chance. He was evil and he didn’t deserve it.


“What do you mean?”

“Since you had a great amount of courage and learned how to love and be kind, being a half demon and vampire, your existence can be spared.”

“How is that?”

“If you make a vow and important promise.”

“What kind of vow and promise?”

“A vow that secures your love for Fionna. You must promise to always love her, keep her safe, and stay by her side. If you promise all these things and truly mean them, you will be spared and you will have a second chance.”


The choice wasn’t hard for Marshall at all. He loved Fionna so much and wanted nothing more than to spend the rest of eternity with her, protecting her and caring for her. He was willing to make the promise and take the deal of a lifetime..


“I will make the vow.” Marshall said.

“Alright, let us begin.” said the spirit.


Marshall made his promise and was now attached to it. His second chance had begun and he was ready to take advantage of it and not waste it. Clouds began to surround him again and he was coming back into existence.
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